Please write two separate responses to this week's prompts.
Prompt #1:
So far, what do you see as the positive aspects of the Community Jonas lives in?
Prompt #2:
So far, what do you see as the negative aspects of the Community Jonas lives in?
There are many positive aspects of the Community. Jonas's Community's etiquette is exceptional. There is no lying, rude questions, and bad behavior that exists in our world. THe community's ruling system is okay as well. People's choices will not harm others since there are not many choice in your lifetime. The Council also gives all the power to themselves so the Community runs smoothly until someone decides to uncover the truth.
ReplyDeleteJonas's community also lacks and has lots of negative aspects. The Community limits all the choices. Everything you do is mandated by the Elders. For the members, there really is no point in life. Your just making the Council look good by creating Utopia. No one has the wisdom to make good choices by bearing all memories from the Community and Elsewhere to the receiver. Eventually the Community will downfall when someone like Jonas decides to reveal the truth to the members.
ReplyDeleteThe positive aspects of the Community are that there is no lying, people don't have to make hard decisions for themselves, and that there are strict rules, like no being rude, or dress codes. The Community might not be fair for everyone, but the system does work well.
ReplyDeleteWhile at first, the Community seems perfect, there are actually many faults with it. People don't have to make decisions, but they also don't get to make decisions. The Community is an oligarchy where a few people, or the Council of Elders, has all the power. There is no lying, but the Council deliberately withholds information from the public. This is illegal for the government today to do. Release is like murder. It is not like abortion, which is still bad, but occurs before a child is born. Release happens after the child is born, so it feels the pain. When it happens to the Old, they might have lived longer before naturally dying. The goal of the Community is to be am utopia, but over time, it became a carefully hidden dysotopia, the opposite of a perfect world.
ReplyDeleteThough Jonas's community can sometimes be strange, there are many positive aspects of the Community. There are no choices, which can be good or bad. You live a every simple life. Every year you gain a privilege until you are a Twelve, and that is when you get your Assignment. You continue that work until you go to the House of the Old, and when you are much older, you are released. The etiquette is also a great part of the Community. People apologize to each other when interrupting or not using precision of language. There is no lying, swearing, or impolite questions. No one complains very much because then they would just get punished. Everyone grows up learning the rules and they are automatically assumed to be the basis of life in the Community.
ReplyDeleteThere are also many negative aspects of life in the Community. As said before, there are no choices, which can be good and bad. It can be bad because the citizens in the community will never learn good from bad. No one bothered to uncover the truth, so they don't know if what they are doing is the right thing or wrong thing. Another thing that isn't the greatest in Jonas's Community is the fact that the citizens don't have a clue about going on. They don't know what the Elders think about, what the truth is, what releasing is, and if what they are doing is right. Everyone must share their feelings and apologize, so nobody's thoughts are private. This can be bad because what others say may influence the thoughts that one may feel inside. Someone may also have great potential, but would not know it because the Elders decide everything from your family unit to your Assignment. Your feelings don't matter in the Community; the only thing that does matter is whether you follow the rules or not.
ReplyDeleteThe positive aspects of Jonas's community are that the people get along well and the rules are fair. It shows good behavior. Their lives are simple. Each year the kids earn privileges until they are twelve. When they become Twelves, they get their Assignment. An Assignment is a job that you have throughout your adulthood. People say sorry to each other if they interrupted each other or did something bad.
ReplyDeleteThere are many positive aspects of the Community Jonas lives in. One of these is about choices. The Community decides the choices for you, so there won't be any hard decisions. Also, every year during a special ceremony you get a new privelage, such as riding a bike. Another great part of this Community is there are no bad habits like lying or rudeness. You must have to listen to and obey all the rules too. The House of the Old is a nice idea too. The volunteers there will take care of you when you become old and life becomes difficult.
ReplyDeleteLike I said before, there are many good aspects of Jonas's Community; however, there are negative aspects as well. As I mentioned the choices are done for you in this community, but that can also mean a bad thing. When the Elders decide your Assingment, some kids people would be mad with what Assingment they received. This would cause arguments and other bad problems. Also, the Assingments could ruin your talent. If someone had great talent in being an athlete, there talent would be ruined if the Elders don't decide the right Assingment. One more negative aspect of this Community is that almost everyone of the people in this community lacks of wisdom. Since the choices are made for them, nobody will learn their mistakes.
ReplyDeleteIn Jonas's community, there can be positive aspects. His and every other kids life is planned out and simple. They always get everything when everyone else gets it so it is fair. Also there is exeptional rules. You cannot be rude or lie which is good in a community. Also instead of you looking for a job, people pick one out for you so you don't go through a struggle.
ReplyDeleteThere are many positive aspects about the Community Jonas lives in. For example, since there are very strict rules and laws, there is always peace in the Community. Also, there is no war, poverty, illnesses, murder, stealing, and other crimes. Everyone is extremely respectful to each other. Plus, everything is perfectly planned, so nothing in your life can go wrong. All of your food is delivered to you, so there will be no food shortages. Furthermore, everyone has to go to school and your job is chosen for you, so there will never be a slump in the economy. Life in the Community is extremely organized.
ReplyDeleteEven though Jonas’s Community has many positive aspects, there are many negative aspects about the Community as well. In the Community, you do not have a say, and the Council of Elders decides everything for you and everyone else. Also, you are not free to do what you want- even your jobs are chosen for you. You cannot change your job, even if you absolutely detest it. The rules never change, and they have laws for the tiniest thing. One of the laws is that you cannot brag, and another law is that you cannot teach your younger sibling how to ride a bike until they turn nine years old. Also, in each family, there can only be two children, and it has to be one boy and one girl. I think these laws are absolutely insane!
ReplyDeleteThere are many positive aspects about the Community. People can live a simple and peaceful life. Each year kids gain something until they are Twelves. Then, they begin training, and soon work. After some time, they move to the House of Old. It is a really simple and easy life. Also, the Community is filled with discipline. There is no swearing or lying. Everyone obeys the rules and nothing in life is meant to go wrong there. There are no murders, thefts, poverty, and other problems. Everyone has a job. Life in the Community is simple, easy, and organized.
ReplyDeletePostive aspects about the Community Jonas is living in are that he isn't always bullied or called any names. There is no harassment in his enviornment. His world is not plagued by any outside things because the Community provides everything you need like food and a home. This gives people less stress as well. Jonas can be more social with friends because he can bike together with them. They only use bicycles to get around. People will be fit because they ride bicycles around.
ReplyDeleteIn Jonas's Communtity, there are good thoughts, but there are also negative thoughts of his Community. There is no freedom for the people in the Community. With freedom, you can make choices. Jonas doesn't have freedom so he cannot make his own choices. Instead, the Council of Elders make choices for you. Many will think that this is good because it doesn't make you worry, but making choices is a part of life. If the Council of Elders make the wrong choice, people would get upset because they couldn't get the right choice to make. People in this Community will not experience what life is really like. You cannot also be in a family that you really care about because they are not people who gave you birth. This is also missing out on real life. After Jonas and other members of the Community recive their jobs, they cannot really see each other for the rest of their life. They don't have a lot of freetime to do what they like.
ReplyDeleteThere are many positve aspects about the Jonas's Community. For example, people apologize to each other when they get interupted. There is also no lying, swearing, or rude questions. Another positive aspect about the Community is that everyone gets an Assigment when they are a Twelve. This way, no one ends up jobless, which leads to no poverty. There is also no murder, thefts, and stealing.
ReplyDeleteI think that the positive aspects are that no one ever dies from violence so many people will live longer.People also don't have to make hard decisions because the Olds choose your job because that will be probably be your hardest choice in life.You also don't have to worry about people lying.It is also a rule that people cant get you into an awkward situation.
ReplyDeleteThe bad parts about the community is that the people there have no freedom.They are trapped in like a world with no choices the people will want to leave if they knew what it would be like in the outside of the community.
ReplyDeleteAlthough there are many positive aspects of living in Jonas's community, there are negative aspects too. People never learn to make choices, for the Council does that all. The rules will never be changed, and there are too many of them. No one really knows much about what happens with releases. People could be doing bad things and not even know about it. All that matters in the Community is that you follow the laws. You can't even keep you feelings to yourself! Living in the Community wouldn't be so great; there are many downsides of living there.
ReplyDeleteThere are numerous positive aspects about the Community. One positive thing is that the Elders make choices for people. The Elders choose what your name is going to be, what your job is, and who you're going to marry. This helps people not have a difficult time making decisions in life. Also, every year until people turn into a Twelve,they get a gift that shows what they have accomplished. For example, when a person turns into a Seven, he or she is given front buttoned jackets to symbolize independence and maturity. Another positive thing about the Community is that everyone gets a job that suits them. Unlike our community today, no one will lose a job in the Community. Politeness is a huge thing for the Community. If you're late, you have to apologize. Life in the Community is simple and has less stress.
ReplyDeleteEven though the Community is organized, there are many negative aspects about it. Since the Elders make decisions for people, people don't get to have there own freedom to choose what they want for their lives. Also, after turning into a Twelve, age is not important anymore, so people sometimes forget their ages. People don't have much freedom; they don't know anything other than what they have been taught. For example, they do not know what freedom is. Everyone's birthdays happen in the same two days,so no one is different. People in the Community do not get much privacy. They are expected to say what they dreamed about the night before, and what they are feeling by the end of the day. People also don't get married to the person they love. The Elders choose a person husband/wife. The Elders chooses everything for people, and people do not get the opportunity to make decisions in their own lives.
ReplyDeleteThe positive aspects of the community Jonas lives in are you get to live longer because there are strict rules against murdering and the community works smoothly with everyone following the rules in the community.
ReplyDeleteThe negative aspects of the community Jonas lives in are you do not get the freedom to make many of your own choices. The community has high expectations and will not be changed. The consequences and rules are also very harsh like releasing a child when already having a boy and girl for a family unit.
ReplyDeleteThe bad parts of the Community are that there are no choices. We couldn't have a say in anything. There is also no freedom to say what we want. The people don't know anything about the outside world. NO one gets their own privacy because they have to share everything. The children can't be with their real parents they are assigned to a family unit. They are also assigned jobs.
ReplyDeleteThere are many positive aspects about the Community. The family units all share their feelings so their parents could fix it. And their family units also take care and protect their kids. It is also very rare if one if the kids get hurt or die because the family unit is very protective over them. Also the Elders watch them very closely so when they get their assignments it is always the right one and it is very rare when they are disappointed with their assignment.
ReplyDeleteEven though the Community has positive aspects there are also negative aspects. Since the Elders chose their assignment they don't have the right to choose what they want to be. Also the kids have no freedom because they don't get a bike until they are nine and girls have to wear hair ribbons until they are about ten years old. Kids also don't have the freedom because everyday during dinner or so they have to share their feelings even if they don't want too. And in the morning they share their dreams to their family unit before leaving too school.
ReplyDeleteThe postive aspects of Jonas's community is that there is no stealing,violence, illness, poverty, and many other bad things.His community is like a utopian society.
ReplyDeleteThe negative aspects of Jonas's community is that they never get to make choices. Everything is chosen for them. Elders choose what their assignments are, what newchild they recieve, how their newchild will grow up, and many other things. Without having the freedom of their own life decisions they will never experience freedom.
ReplyDeleteI think the posative aspects of the community are that like is pretty much very easy there is very little work put on every person, so there is little stress. They do not have to worry about the normal things like looking nice becuase they have a uniform or finishing there work on time becuase they have very little work to do. They also do not need to worry about things like fighting with their friends becuase they have rules against being rude and violent which are ussually the things that triger fights.
ReplyDeleteThe negative aspects of the community are that they have no freedom. Neither children or adults are free to do anything, for example their jobs are chosen for them whether they like it or not, they cannot express themselves becuase they have to wear a uniform, and they cannot shoose when they want to do things like when they want to start riding a bike or start thier volenteer hours. They get no say in anything, and I would not enjoy that.
ReplyDeleteSome of the positive effects of Jonas's community are that the Elders make almost all the choices for every single person in the community, so that everything is ordered and there is no conflict, when a person turns Twelve, they are assigned a job and they cannot lose their job or change it, with the exception of Birthmother, and the fact that the community makes life so easy and simple for people to live in with no violence or other pains.
ReplyDeleteEven though there are many positive aspects in the Community, there are many negative aspects as well. The Elders in the Community choose what people's roles are, which takes away the community members' freedom. There are speakers to listen to what everyone is saying, and if they hear anything spoken that they think is inapropriate,they change the rules, or add new rules. This give the community members no control of their of lives, for everything is chosen for them.
ReplyDeleteSome of the negative aspects of Jonas's community are that people cannot have the freedom of making their own choices like picking a spouse, Assignment, or a child, you have very strict rules about everything, releasing of people is very cruel, and the fact that you have almost no free time to do a fun thing you want. Life in the Community is not very fun, though they live very orderly and peacefully.
ReplyDeleteThere can be multiple positive aspects of the
ReplyDeleteCommunity. One if them is that the Elders get to have the preasure of having to chose everyone's role in life, while you don't. Another thing is that if you do something wrong or out of order, all you have to do is apologize. Not even a slight punishment! Since the Elders take care of society, the citizens don't have to worry about anything.
Even if the Community is a highly organized system, there can be negative aspects. First of all, the citizens never know the meaning of freedom or choice. Besides, who would want that?
ReplyDeleteThere are many positive affects in the world that Jonas is living. There are not any rude or bad things you can do like lying. It will be good because no one will be hurt in his or her mind. Also, there will be no people who are afraid or worried to go outside. No worry or anger by rudness means no stress.
ReplyDeleteAlthough Utopia has many positive affects, it also has some negetive affects. In Utopia, the Elders make decisions for Juniors. This will take the Junior's freedom away. For example, when you choose your own job, if the Elders tell you to be a miner even thogh you want to me doctor, are you going to be happy about it?Even in U.S., which has so many crimes, gives people their freedom to speech, to believe, to become, and to write. So having no crime is not better than no freedom.
ReplyDeleteAs Jonas's world rages on with hatred, there is still some positive aspects in his world. The place is disciplined meaning there are no hurt feelings. Also to the point where you can be feeling joy and safety as you go outside, no mean comments to insult anyones looks or intelligence.
ReplyDeleteThe community is peaceful, but not in a good way. The community don't even know the word freedom and their choices weren't chosen themselves, but chosen for them. Their age was considered a thing and families were referred to as units. In Jonas's time, it's not the home of the free.
ReplyDeleteThe positive aspects of Jonas's community are that the kids in the neighborhood become respectful. They get their independence as they grow up. They become good members of the community. The people in the community also do good things. The community has certain rules that they have to follow. Following the rules would make people the law obeying member of the comunity. Another positive aspect is that they get Assignments that they have to complete. They become responsible people. They are also organized by their age and number they get when they are born. The people share what they dreamed and how they feel. They become a very well organized community.
ReplyDeleteThere are also some negative aspects in Jonas's community. The people in the community don't have the choice to choose their assignments. The rules are very strict. People are not allowed to have more than two kids in the family. This rule limits the freedom of the people. They also don't let people choose their own jobs. Some people have to accept jobs that they don't want. These rules violate people's right and freedom of choice. People lack their independence due to the rules. Kids don't get their independence for many simple things that kids of same age in different communities can do. Voluntary work is supposed to be voluntary, not mandatory. The people in the community are not allowed to joke around and play. These rules violate people's right of free speech and freedom of enjoyment. The rules in this community can be very unfair.
ReplyDeleteThere are many positive aspects in the Community. The first is that there is no discrimination, poverty, violence, or wars. The second is that everyone has a job in the Community, based on what you excel in. The last is that you do not have to do much, for the Elders chose everything for you.
ReplyDeleteSo far, the positive aspects of the Community are that everybody feels accepted. Also, there are no homeless people; everyone is taken care of. All of the people contribute to the Community and are told what to do. For example, everyone is given a family, a dwelling, and at Twelve, they are given a job. There are many rules for the Community and the discipline is harsh so most people follow them. Everyone is required to have good grammar and apologize if they do something wrong. All of this structure makes the Community have a very positive atmosphere.
ReplyDeleteThe communtity can have its positive aspects such as having an assigned job that removes the worry of rejection of a job and not to mention it is a job that fits your qualities. Another good aspect is that many fun objects are given to you as you age such as a bike when your age 9.
ReplyDeleteThere are some negative aspects of the community as well. One thing is that all decisions are made for you and so you really have no say or freedom. Another is there are harsh punishments such as physical hits when a child misbehaves.
ReplyDeleteWhile there are many positive things about the Community, there are also many negative aspects. One negative thing is that you have no choice in your spouse or job. When you are parents, you are only allowed to have one boy and one girl and you have no say in what they are named. Also, your children aren't related by blood. It is hard to remember and obey all of the rules and children can't ride a bike until Nine. When you are a Three, it is hard to remember to use correct grammar and the consequence is very painful. In the Community people aren't allowed to make many choices of their own.
ReplyDeletethe positive aspects of the Community that Jonas lives in are that it is a very nice place and no one is mean or rude. You no longer have to worry about teasing or getting your feelings hurt. It is also a very organized community.
ReplyDeleteThe negative aspects of Jonas's community is that since your children aren't really your children, there isn't a special bond. you have no choices to make because it is already chosen FOR you. Sometimes that is a good thing and sometimes it is a bad thing. Life isn't very exciting when you don't make choices.
ReplyDeleteThe positive aspects of the Community is that each family unit doesn't need to worry about kidnapping or so. The Community is a safe, Earth-friendly place to live.
ReplyDeleteThe negative aspects of the Community is that everyone can't make their own decisions, you are like a little three-year-old, when your parents are choosing decisions for you, for the best. That means the people of the Community might lay all of their depends on the council; which is not good. The teachers give painful hits to the students if they do something wrong. I think that the parents should handle all of these troubles, the parents are the ones that protect and teach their children how to behave, so I think that teachers should not punish the kids, it has to be deicded on the parents.
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